L3 - GROUP 2 (Hannah & Emma) Film Opening Rough Cut from cmdiploma on Vimeo.
I thought this was a good opening, but there is some little tweaks to be made, which the group probably know. But a lot of strengths
Strengths:
- I thought the music went really well with the characters, because the lyrics can connect to them.
- There is a wide variety of shots, and angles. I particually liked the shot when the camera zooms in the mirror, and zooms back out. This shows the two characters well, and gives a very teen feel.
- I like that they added some humour by overdoing the geek, and the shot with the tipex and nail polish.
Things to work on:
- Titles
- In a few shots i could still hear some backround noise, i dont know if this was intentional, but it may be worth a look.
- A few of the shots are too shaky, but most work well.
- There is a gap between clips, but i believe this is going to be filled in.
Over all i think the group have done very well, and theres only a few things they need to work on. Well Done ! XD
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